BookRix

Good start and very good writing skills. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Cant wait for the next part. Sounds like an intriguing tale

Thank you :) I'll keep you updated, and I'd love to hear your ideas! Stories like this and Fallen Dreams just sort of play themselves out in my head, even before I get to that part in the story. Any suggestions are welcome :D

Well, this is only a little bit of the first chapter. The summary is more of what's going to happen. The beginning that I've posted is when Ira found Brohem in the forest, and he had a short flashback to the attack. It will be explained more later on

Thank you :) I'm not to sure about the style, it's a bit harder for me to write in third person... I'll definitely keep you updated :)

It was good so far, but not at all like your summary. Where's the rest of it?

It was well written so for, the style nice, and a great start to a promising book:) (message me when you post more)
-SelishXIII