you should add more... like she should wake up in the hospital or something and she should go into a coma and she should find her friend and try to bring her back.
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I loved it though it is short it was really sad...
Will there be more to it??.(:
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I almost cried at how beautiful this was. But I was expecting a happy ending, but at least now they can be together?
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Is this it? is there more? i'm confused.
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omg!! u put this up in my birthday!!! nov.15th!!! i am definitely reading it!! it looks really interesting!!
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that was awesome piece of writing, I actually felt the intenseness of the story well done, you pulled some of my heart strings there.
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This squeezed my heart and I believe we all have a lost loved one in mind when we read something this emotional. Good luck and God Bless.
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