BookRix

so sad

I liked the story a lot. I as a lot of people wish that pat would not have died,and that he could have shopped for x mas. It was a very moveing story. Keep up the great work.

I loved this story Ed. You truly have the gift of storytelling. Good luck with the contest and keep writing.

Very moving.

Robin told me to check out your story - I am glad that she did..yes, time is precious...Paula

Ed, I found your story to be a wonderful piece. I enjoyed reading it. You weaved it into perfection. It was sad the fate of Pat, but the story does hit close to home with the reality of it all. I hope many take their time to read your story and appreciate it as much as I.

CAV LASTER

...this is a story that, I believe, has it all. I know you dislike it when people use the word 'great', but I'm going to have to use that word here anyway.
I personally believe you have a 'great' talent, and this is a 'great' story. If Marian helped you with this...I think she is 'great' too. 'Great' team! (I'm still choked-up, and I don't cry for Humans often)...

This was a touching story Ed. This is a reminder to love your loved-ones with all of your heart and everyday that you have them in your life.

God bless,

Tyrone

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian