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was a great story but sad at the end. i really enjoyed it. thank you, sylvia kilmartin

Enjoyed story, but i felt like i was caught in a box. Now please do not get me wrong this is a very interesting story. great plot but not enough for the readers though this is a short story, take a leap of faith and add to your work.
Remember to indent paragraphs. But hey I was a young pup at once in my writing when i first started my first book. They would have stuck it in the Ripley's show case of insane books.
hang in there it takes time I will be looking for an additional side of this work.

Death never comes at a convenient time. Ed

good story, but was page nine the end? Leaves ubruptly. Otherwise, well writen.

The honesty of the words ring true even though it is fiction. This story has a core of reality that is painful and is yet beautiful.

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It could have ended a number of ways,,,you left me wanting more.

Good read.

This is a fast-paced emotional family drama that tugs at your heart. Yes, it is a sad story but then confession & reconciliation often does have this element. I like how the author has an economy of words in this story & yet we feel the emotional impact. Good luck with this contest, Ed.

I enjoyed the drama and he family inter relationships. Overall there is a sadness about the story. Time is short but when Cancer is a reason then the Devil drives and ever moment counts.
Good luck with the contest.