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Ed,
A cracking tale of the sea and all its might.Good characters and plenty of tension.I enjoyed reading the story.Well done.

Excellent story Ed.
This is well deserving the Star I'm giving to it. And yes I'm saving to my favorites, my friend.

~David

This story was excellent! It was well written, vivid and realistic as if your were recounting an event that you took part in...I enjoyed the use of the nautical terminology which gave the story more realism and depth!

Excellent! You have a star and a vote from me!

I am part way though and I don't want to stop. A very good write that keeps you on the edge of your seat.
Yes, a definite vote!
Good luck to you.

I love the sea. You did a grand job with this piece. The physical and settings descriptions were enough to place me in the scene. I felt like I was there fighting to survive. I gave you a vote. Couldn't let this baby pass me by. Keep up the good work. ;-)

Nothing like being on the edge of your seat! Suspense was almost too much waiting for the whole lot of them to sink their ships. Great story!

Thank you for participating in our free writing contest "Rain Stories".

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