Cry Me a Waterfall

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Cry Me a Waterfall
when ronnie, her little sister, lily, and her mother Clair get into a car crash ronnie's father leaves them and ronnie must fend for not only herself but her little sister as well.

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dolo412.books

EMILY, I HAVE READ YOUR FIRST CHAPTER.
IT FLOWS VERY NICELY, YOU HAVE A FLARE
FOR WRITING AN INTERESTING NARATIVE. IT IS A PAGE TURNER.
PS YOU MIGHT THINK OF DOING THIS AS A
SHORT STORY(NOVELLA) AN EASIER TASK?
ALL IN ALL VERY IMPRESSIVE.

MR. DOLO

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Cooool. lol idk what else to say but nice book

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emmylove4ever

i knew it was u as soon as i went on your pg! da wolves gave it away, and thank 4 the addvice

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cole888

Why do wolves always give me away! alo please please please read my prolouge i edited it and all i think its actually kind of good!

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cole888

Hi Emily, i think you know who this is, :3 i love how you put "Sparky and Hammy" in the book!

i do have some advice though

when in dioluog (spelled that wrong)
try to space it out so i know who's talking cuz sometimes i wasnt really sure and maybe fix your spelling errors or whatever. other then that i loved it i think you really improved since when you first started writing "A Wolfs Life" i'm going to post the proloug for my... mehr anzeigen

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