Writer in Money Rain

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nisamsuzi

I don't understand the end. What does being a parent have to do with money rain?

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drunkenthinker

THE POOR KNOW THAT HAVING A CHILD IS NOTHING SO EASY TO DARE FOR. THIS IS A DESIRE AND THIS FACT LINK IT WITH MONEY (RAIN)

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donnamyoung

A very different concept, and yet compelling in a strange sort of way. I think you have lots of potential! Keep plugging away. I voted for you and gave you a star that I hope will help give you confidence to stay with it. God Bless.

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drunkenthinker

That's really kind of you donna (if I am right with your first name!)
I do appreciate your consideration and herein I'd like to invite you to put an eye on my comming Bitter-Comic series which I'm about to (kind of) put out.
The experience is quite new to me, that's why I think I... mehr anzeigen

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carrie3

The end suggests your mc was about to lose what was most precious to him, when the girl either hung up or he lost connection and it's that losing connection (with reality, one's human side?) that's at the heart of the story for me. Money raining down too - it's still rain, isn't it? And worse it's causing bloodshed. I like your style, and it's not a problem for me, but I reckon some might not appreciate this work as the mc... mehr anzeigen

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emybby96

Well it was a rather wierd consept. It was wierdly written. It doesnt seem to flow, it seems to drag. It was a little to dark for my tastes. Im not saying you are a bad author, you have a lot of potential but you should try and make it a little easiar to read by conveying your thoughts a little better. and by seperating the diolouge using " " quotations. for example.
"What are you talking about" Jenny exclaimed. i am not at... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

Strange story and very rambling and most definitely bloodthirsty.

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drunkenthinker

WELL, THAT'S HOW THE WRITER IN THE MONEY RAIN FELT. YOUR BLOODTHIRSTY DOESN'T MAKE SENSE TO ME THOUGH. I'D RATHER CALL HIM A NAIVE.

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