when I started to read I thought it is just a simple story, yes it is a simple story. but, at the end you did something to me. You put something inside me to think. Well done! nice work! don't stop writing, write a long story please.
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Thankyouuu! :D
And yes, I won't ever stop writing!
A short story, but a story which you will keep in mind for a long time. I believe most if us have had that shorty, incomplete sketch somewhere, waiting for us to complete it.
Many a time, we meet someone who leaves a print on our heart and soul, and we want to meet them again but can never.
People who have faced this, will sweetly relate to this story. I loved it...!!
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Thank you! :D
Just one observation of an otherwise sweet little tale. In the last paragraph you say she often goes back to the village to see Raghav again, to tell him how sweet the candy was, etc., yet you begin the section with the words, "And then, we never meet again." How could she see him and tell him this, or complete her picture of him if they never meet again? Maybe you meant that she often goes back to remember or something, or... mehr anzeigen
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Thank you so much for reading the story and making a nice comment. ')
What I meant by the last section of the story was that the girl often visits the village, as she wants to meet the boy again and tell him how sweet his candies were, etc., but unfortunately she never met the... mehr anzeigen
That's what I guessed. Perhaps you could say exactly those words there so the paragraph doesn't contradict itself. Great job, by the way! Again, sweet story - I really enjoyed it!
Thank you, again!
omg I'll love it! this book have a great story!
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Thank you so much! : ) <3
Awsome. You really write like professionals.
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It is simple and beautiful story :)
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I love how you write this especially the title; The incomplete Sketch
P.S English is not also my native langguage so I can relate how hard it is to put what's on your mind into words immediately but still goodluck in finishing the book :)
- Leandra A
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)