this is good . lots of tension . i like the nway you cut back and forth to each character and i want to know what happens next.
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Whao.. This is something interesting.. It makes me curious to know the ending of the story. Other than that its a smooth flow of the story with a perfect choice of words. Great work. Keep it up. :)
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Thank you so much! :D
I'm glad you liked it. :)
Wow! You must update! What exactly is going on? I see that there is kidnapping but but but its pretty good so far don't mind me and my rambling! :)
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Haha, thank you. :)
It's really a very good story !! Please update .. :-)
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I don't know if I like it or not, because I am not able to judge what is the actual plot of the story maybe that's why.
I think this is a different kind of story, so all I can do is wait for you to update before I actually decide how much I like it... Do update soon sweets..!
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Oh okay! ')
i'm reading. interesting.
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Thanks :)
U write really nice!!..
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Thanks a lot! :D
Its interesting... please update it... and d previous one too...
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Thanks :D
Yeah sure :)
will be waiting... :)
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:D :) :)
Thank you so much. I'm going to update the book soon. :)