A Different Love Story...!!

Love triangle... <3 Von:
User: Diya
A Different Love Story...!!

Her love for the guy knew no limits..!

He cheated on her...!

This left her in a state where she can't move nor talk, yeah! She is in Coma!!

And then, someone else came in her life, to cure her, look after her, and only to make her realise what love is...!!

For one, she is nothing but a fiery girl, for the other she is his angel, his Sleeping Beauty..!!

Who will she choose, the one who she thinks she loves, or the one who actually and truly loves her...!!!

A simple yet touching love story...!!

I have updated the book till now, and edited the errors and also added description. Please let me know how you find this.


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andrewn04

Hi,
I would like to invite you to write on the platform I work with.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

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Ambro

Please update need to know what happen after. So interested.

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Shayna Aquila

The wording is almost poetic like, it gives the whole story a romantic feel to it! Some grammar errors but honestly that's unavoidable for me too haha other than that it was perfect, I really liked it! A little more descriptive imagery would have made it prime!

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Diya

Thank you Shayna. Don't know, as this is the first time I am ever writing a fiction story, and maybe I am not able to give enough time to it coz of office work. But, I am just preparing the draft and writing the idea, and it will develop later for sure. Thanks again.

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Gelöschter User

I really love this book and the story is too special and i really like it!! Please update .... :-) :-) :-)

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Diya

Hey there!!! Thanks a ton for the kind words. I am kind of stuck what to write next, so please give me some time before I update it. I will keep you posted. And if you have any suggestions, please share...!!

Gelöschter User

:-)

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Sakshiii

I liked how you started the story. The narration is lucid and quite good.
This book is really interesting.
Update soon.

:)

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Diya

Hi Sakshi. Thank you so much for the positive comment. I am looking to more such from friends. :)

I will update this soon.

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Diya

Still writing this book.... please share how do you find it....

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