BookRix

come on...please please write more cuz i don`t understand it just yet.

This is fantastic can you give me some tips on wrighting a story as good as yours.

I think you mean "Undecided Fate". Also the letter [i] should be [I]. I make this mistake all the time.
Yes, you should write the rest of this book. It is good but hurry so you can get votes. To help out, I'll give you one./joeparente

hi do u really think the part 1 of undecided fate is good. i am thinking of writing the second part but was worried that it was a bit amateur and childish

you had better write more to this story!

hey this is a really great book !! cant wait to read more :)