i like this book its really interesting
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it is a good book, cant wait to see the rest of it.. I really like it
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haha thanks kaitey :D
I just came from a family vacation so i havnt been in awhile but I'll try to get some up soon. Thanks again :D <3
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You're leaving me in suspense, and it's killing me... :\
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It's looking great! I love the updates! Great job, :).
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I have to say I like what you have so far. Since it is the beginning I'd have to agree with the comments below that maybe reading aloud would help a bit. There weren't many mistakes that hindered me from reading but reading aloud would help fix those. For example on the first page it was "her" instead of "here" but nothing that prevented me from understanding what you meant.
Also, add a bit of information to the characters.... mehr anzeigen
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The direction is good and I can start to feel that Catherine will soon start making life changing decisions. Keep it up and let me know when you get more done.
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