Squamish, BC
If he’s such a successful businessman, why isn’t he showing his taxes to prove
it?
We know from all his lies that we can’t trust his word.
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For the most part, this is well-told. The biggest problem I have isn't with content, but with the formatting. You have massive paragraphs with no break even for dialogue. I found myself skimming through most of it because too many words were kept in a single block. The human mind doesn't do well with that because it becomes extremely difficult to follow.
Add paragraphs every few sentences, and when a person speaks. If you're... mehr anzeigen
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Thank you for the kind words. My problem is a lack of knowledge. It always looks good in MS Word then I upload it and it looks completely different. I guess I need to learn how to format it here. I also get frustrated when I hit the publish button and then it looks even farther... mehr anzeigen
Here's a suggestion for using the BookRix formatting system. Do not use the "Upload" option when creating your book. Use the "Type in Content" option instead. Then copy/paste your document chapter-by-chapter, using the pre-established chapters for each one and giving it a number... mehr anzeigen