Life Happens

Or something like that Von:
Life Happens

I bet your life is just like this. You will not find anything in these pages that is unfamiliar to you because everyone has similar problems and events. Who hasn't taken part in the occasional attempted murder. And who hasn't burned down a meth lab or or come across psychotic cults deep in the woods? So this is all the same old boring and common things that happen every day. It is so boring in fact that you probably won't even want to read about it.  


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Murder, Betrayal, Love
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Squamish, BC

If he’s such a successful businessman, why isn’t he showing his taxes to prove
it?

We know from all his lies that we can’t trust his word.

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judycolella

For the most part, this is well-told. The biggest problem I have isn't with content, but with the formatting. You have massive paragraphs with no break even for dialogue. I found myself skimming through most of it because too many words were kept in a single block. The human mind doesn't do well with that because it becomes extremely difficult to follow.

Add paragraphs every few sentences, and when a person speaks. If you're... mehr anzeigen

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edensashes

Thank you for the kind words. My problem is a lack of knowledge. It always looks good in MS Word then I upload it and it looks completely different. I guess I need to learn how to format it here. I also get frustrated when I hit the publish button and then it looks even farther... mehr anzeigen

judycolella

Here's a suggestion for using the BookRix formatting system. Do not use the "Upload" option when creating your book. Use the "Type in Content" option instead. Then copy/paste your document chapter-by-chapter, using the pre-established chapters for each one and giving it a number... mehr anzeigen

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