BookRix

sooo would you guys be mad if I re-wrote the book? I want to keep the characters and the general idea I had for the book but I feel like I really just need to rethink the way I started the book.....

So sorry for the delay! I promise I will write more as SOON as I can. I am honestly just having a MAJOR writers block so hopefully I can think of something soon!

Thanks alot! :) Yeah I read over the book and realized I have some editing to do. I am actually thinking of changing a few things I had planned but not too much. Thanks for your honesty it helps alot!

haha do you really like it that much?

come on, more please

Hahah yea thanks :) That was very helpful. I haven't really written anything in a long time so it will be a while before I write anymore.

This is a pretty good book, the premise is very interesting, and is enjoyable. You need to work on your writing a little bit though, when you describe someone, you might want to work on making them seem a little bit more natural, and compare them to something or say what it makes the main character feel. Also, you might want to make some compound sentences, and add more transitions into them. Other than that there were a few editing misses like forgetting to capitalize a name. I enjoyed it, and plan to continue reading this book as you come out with it, and hope that my critique was helpful.

Thank you. That is helpful. :)

just read it, and it's a good start.
I encourage you to be original and daring and add more on. good read.

This is the first book I have ever written.Please read it and be honest about what you think about it. It is a bit rough around the edges and I'm not finished but I think it will turn out pretty good.