BookRix

awesome

it was great

great book keep writing

better grammer and spelling next time

great book

it was okay- interesting

I will take that with me i wrote a little more.And thx for reading it i will have more

You should go back and insert paragraphs into this because it's difficult to read as it is.
I love your visual presentation. Well done.
Let me know if you make changes and I'll come back and read it.
Good luck
Wendy

It`s very well written you need good punctuation still please write more