Thanks for the comment and it is a work in progress i am going to add to it and i will follow your suggestion of adding details. And Again Thank you.
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Oops, just realized this is a series. But weird, your label read short stories (?) Anyway, I think it would be good if you continue this :)
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:)Interesting story. Would have wanted it longer but enjoyed the read nonetheless. I would also suggest adding more descriptions more so in the head and dinosaur. But overall it was good. :)
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