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me and my friend just read this. i think it was awsome and want to know more, while she thinks its messed up. WRITE MORE!!!!!!!

Hmmmmm..... interesting.... Bravo. I lvoe the language.

Hmmmmm..... interesting.... Bravo. I lvoe the language.

Hmmmmm..... interesting.... Bravo. I lvoe the language.

Hmmmmm..... interesting.... Bravo. I lvoe the language.

Hmmmmm..... interesting.... Bravo. I lvoe the language.

Your story is difficult to digest.I am a pure vegetarian and also beleive in non-voilenvce,IF meeting your own self is meeting that horrible element in you,it require revision in ideology and change in
thinking. I still feel i have not yey fully understood the content,The time is short,medium not proper..I 'll tyy your poems..then only something can be told.
Thank you..your imagination is wonderful..let this be used in the positive and creative direection.

Your story is difficult to digest.I am a pure vegetarian and also beleive in non-voilenvce,IF meeting your own self is meeting that horrible element in you,it require revision in ideology and change in
thinking. I still feel i have not yey fully understood the content,The time is short,medium not proper..I 'll tyy your poems..then only something can be told.
Thank you..your imagination is wonderful..let this be used in the positive and creative direection.

Except the description of the killing of the rabbit and killing Mari, we only understand that the heroine has killed her parents because of frequent quarrels between them and after several days when the corpses rotted in the house, she has killed the rabbit and then Mari and then ate Mari's heart.
This does not seem plausible. There is a sense of disappointment after a strong start of gory description. This story should be prolonged and the facts must appear plausible, then it will make a better impact.