This story is symbolic of what children do as friends, sibblings, and the best of friends.
I never thought of my brothers and sisters as being my best friend; however, as I think about the good times I have had in life...Well the best of times were with my family. This I do remember.
Thank you for a lovely book.
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A lovely story, filled with moments of love, and memories. I enjoyed this very much. God Bless
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Davis, I liked and voted for your short story. What most impressed me was the very good dialogue!
Sal Buttaci
author of Like Snowflakes Descending
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I enjoyed the story. It was nice reading about three sibblings. There is usually conflict whenever the number three is involved. This was handeled nicely and it was a joy to read.
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The story is a nice piece of reminiscence; really took me to where you were emotionally. Maybe a few things I would change but overall this is a very strong piece.
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This story took me back to my childhood and many outdoor and spelunking adventures our family had, thanks for that Davis!
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Inspired me to remember some of my childhood memories - although, I'm still a child. Very well written. Holds a sense of wonder and mysticism.
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Jason might have lived life headlong as an adult, also. And he is still near you, you know. Lucille
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I really enjoyed this story, though it was sad I found it made me smile.
Good luck.
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