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Nice flash piece. It read well but I noticed you changed verb tenses from present tense in page one to past tense in page two. Nevertheless, I enjoyed this story and your concept of how you viewed rain when transitioning from death to life. Cool.

I thought your approach to heaven was very encouraging. I hope that everyone does research into where they might spend eternity. I voted for you. God Bless You.

Interesting approach to the hereafter.

Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Rain Stories".

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