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I thank you, most that I post on here are rough, and yes they do need help.

David

You have good ideas and good sequence between action and reflection;however, grammar, sentence fragments and composition are very distracting. I suggest you read story outloud - make changes and then get someone to copy edit. Keep writing - good to read your work.

i did a school play on this book and i love it

I found myself drawn into this story, waiting to find out what would happen. It seems sad and yet there is hope at the end, of his rescue and return to his bride. Your ship descriptions are quite thorough. What a lovely, heartwarming tale of a shipwrecked survivor longing to be with his mate for life. Great job, David.
Melissa
Fan of David

i read it for my home work and it was gr8t i loved it how the author put gr8t words n nice structure thanks david

lost at see....is a great story of neverending love....and a walk between between death and life.

GREAT WRITING!

sincerely greets
renate

He hung in there knowing he had to return to her! Love conquers all, doesn't it? Great, David! Good luck! Petra :)

Nice story. Other than grammar issues, I believe it played out well. You got a vote from me.

Very good writing. I feel that you have real talent. Keep going. You got a vote and a star from me. God Bless