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Hey :)
I got through a few chapters and I like it!
my only thing would be is please make the paragraphs a little smaller, maybe add some dialogue in the beginning too. :)
I didn't get really far but I do really like it so far :)
Keep being awesome :)
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Awesome story
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DragonLover2014
Thanks
reggie600
Have to see what happens next:)
DragonLover2014
Hehe... I am working on it.. I want to get to 10000 words by the end of the month.. but idk yet
I thought about that.. as another suggested.. I just haven't had a chance to really get into my book.. Thanks Suri
No problem dude!
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