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Good story, I like the book, and there is another best book to read is The Perfect Author, you can read it on http://theperfectauthor.in Really mind blowing, worth to read.
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Good content if you can get past all of the grammar errors, spelling and use of wrong names.
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Fun to read, good concept. Keep up the work and I look forward to another.
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great book hope to see a sequal about john's adventures!
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This book was wonderful. There is a great deal of editing needed, but the story was excellent! I was engrossed from beginning to end. The story line was original, well thought out and had a lot of depth. Once editing for grammer, spelling and redundancy is finish, the book could be a huge success. I will be looking forward to more from this author. The hours spent reading this book were hours well spent!
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Hi David,
Unfortunately I cannot provide enough time to read your entire story (still have 25 other 'please read' requests). I will, however, still read bits and pieces and comment soley on that. Therefore, plot will not be appropriately assessed.
At first read, I've noticed some spelling and grammar errors. You have a nice pace and your story opening is interesting. I think your story could do with some tightening, there are... mehr anzeigen
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Hello everyone
If you have read, or have started to read, my book 'The Samsara Project' and you have/are enjoyed/enjoying it then could you please recommend it to your friends and colleagues as, like everyone who has written a book, I would like as many people as possible to read it and then I hope there will be select readership for the sequel.
Thanks everyone
Best wishes and happy writing
Dave
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You got it Dave!!
Hi David,
Although I am in the middle of your great story...very informative, compelling , well written story I can't wait to finish reading. You have my vote and a star. After Your book, I regret asking you to read my little short story in the contest A Deadly Drive-by there is no comparisons to your excellent work...
Linda B
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Thank you for your kind comments. Of course I'd love to read your story 'A Deadly Drive' Thank you for the invitation.
I hope you enjoy the rest of my book and I look forward to your comments when you have.
Best Wishes
Dave