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tina2010, I really appreceated your comments a lot andi think i will start writing again and maybe it might get better in the long run.

thank you for your comments and it's meant a lot to me,

This is a good start for your first book. You have a nice story concept. Just continue to write because we all learn from our experience. Have a great week!

well, i think this tale was funny and this is my first book and i hope everyone who read it like it.