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It was great and I can not wait for the update.
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Just updated chapter 9 to my book plz read and enjoy XD
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Just Updated Chapter 7 Please read.... XD
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i think its good, it just needs a lot more detail. it happens a bit to fast.
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That was really good, I can't wait for you to update again
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It was a very wowing book! I don't know what to say besides well don't! though I hope my husband isn't like that!
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To all the people who read and added my book to their favs thank you and I just updated hope you read and enjoy this new chapter XD
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okay thanks for the honesty
and its all happening so fast because of the vast amount of things I have to take place in the story but thanks anyway XD
well, to draw in a reader, you want to leave them hanging and put more detail so they aren't taking in so much in a small period of time, that can confuse the reader, and if they're like me and read the whole thing in less than four minutes, you're gonna want to put more detail in.
oh and it can use some editing, some grammar, spelling and punctuation mishaps in there that need to be edited.
the story is finished yet i'm still editing it