I have no idea how old you are, but am guessing you are a teenager.
First the good news:
This is a very good start to your book. Your ideas are great and the plot moves along at a fast clip, holding the reader's interest and definitely leaves me wanting more at the end.
The bad news...which can be fixed with a little editing and help..is your spelling and grammar.
I do not usually offer help to young people because it is often a... mehr anzeigen
I have no idea how old you are, but am guessing you are a teenager.
First the good news:
This is a very good start to your book. Your ideas are great and the plot moves along at a fast clip, holding the reader's interest and definitely leaves me wanting more at the end.
The bad news...which can be fixed with a little editing and help..is your spelling and grammar.
I do not usually offer help to young people because it is often a great deal of work and takes time that I do not have. I would suggest you join the YOUNG WRITERS group, moderated by Wendy Reakes, ChrisC and Prakash...a new group that will be very helpful to you as they specialize in Young Adult books.
However, since you DO show a great deal of promise, and if you would like my help in editing what you have written so far, please let me know.
Valerie
