Nice story, Fantastic build up. just that u need to work on the editing there are some minor error in spelling and a little in use of words. maybe you give ur friends to read b4 u publish so they would see some error u fail to see since its ur work. N of coz I will b willing to help if u want
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That was a good story....I wish it had been longer.....Sequel time perhaps ? :)
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i love this book so much u have to make a second one and i can help u with ideas if u want
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Hi Danielle Palmer,
I am from Hungary, and my native language isn't English... but I had just read one of your book called: Crazy (finished) but amazing.
I really enjoyed it and I must tell, you are a really great writer (Congratulations!!!!) because in this book wasn't any unclear unit and I also could feel each paragraph feeling.
This story is written in really good way by you: Congratulations again!
Finally, I just want to... mehr anzeigen
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