BookRix

beautiful i love it

A simple story but showed the message about the importance of a family. Sometimes we regret for our mistakes late in life but learning and changing to become a better person is more important. Nice work!

A moving tribute to your parents Danielle. Pity that you entered the story so late but I hope more people read it.

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

Hi Danielle,

I liked your short story, you've shown a transition from childhood and limited understanding to that of a maturing young woman. It's a shame the comment on life being pointless, but I guess it is when we question our life in this way, that we realise that it is up to our own selves to make what we want of our life. I can see you doing that.

Good work.

Very astute conclusions for one so young...Paula