The Magical Castle

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The Magical Castle
This is a book i heard of but its my idea in general i got the base of the book idea from the old story i heard but other than that this book was 100% mine. Enjoy!

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Review - Everyone has a story. Either they have lived one, learned one, or imagined one. It is not, in the beginning, how well you write, but that you desire to write. Just as a child, you crawled, then desired to walk, and had to practice to do it.

You started off well. You built a scene, had suspense, created questions. This is good. Halfway on the second page, when she finds the knight, you lost Point of View and it was a... mehr anzeigen

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iluv.gummybears

this book sucks and i dont think you should write any more so thats all i gotta say and you should take my advice

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