BookRix

Thanks. I decided to do a seperate story on the missing dog.

Was a little confused when you jumped to the part about the missing dog? Liked the story line and hope you'll continue the book. Lots of typos, but I'm of the mind to get your thoughts down and then go back and fix errors. But you should try to fix them. Good beginning! Tiergirl

i lked dta book so much

i lked dta book so much

Story is in a rough work in progress. Thanks. Fresh eyes help find those areas I have not thought through.

on the assessment of your story...left a vote and heart and took book...p

Yeah I am bad. I used windows spellcheck. Guess they need to work o9n that and i need to get a dictonary,

punctuation a spelling errors. Should clean up nicely. Great job!

great story i like it

I have returned to vote.
Chris