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A Past Killing is on the book jacket but A Death In The Past is inside on the title page. This was confusing.
I opened your book and was delighted. I could envision the characters in front of me, and wanted to read more. The problem I see is it was to short. While I know a lot of books are done with chapters this has a tendency to put me off. I admit to being impatient, I feel some of the shorter books tease, and when I get... mehr anzeigen
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I rated it that because I am not sure if its going to get graphic or not. also I have added a few passages just now. If you have read them thanks. I might change the rating.
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i'm also a fan of steampunk. and i'm wondering why this book is rated 18+? is it going to get extremely violent or erotic? :)
update me when there's more to read please
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Thanks. Mostly grammar I believe. But that is what drafts are for. Will be adding more today.
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I love steampunk, and you have a good start to your story.
There are a few small mistakes, but for now, I'm just hoping you will update soon.
Let me know when you add more!
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