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I Love Reading this book ,at first I thought, I would not like it but I do .

This is only the first two chapters - there is much more written on this website -http://www.hestillwatches.com/onlineflip/index.html

I am only half done, and definitely want to finish it some day soon....but for now, this is what there is... it will explain a few questions from the first two chapters....

Enjoy!

Dale A. Moses

Thank you very much! I look forward to your notes... I have had no training as a writer, nor have I ever had a course, other than long nights reading Stephen King - so any advice is welcomed, as I basically am horrible at this sort of thing - Thanks for taking the time!

Dale A. Moses

Eee-gads, I'm going to have nightmares tonight. I love horror stories and this one definitely falls into that catagory. I'm just now trying my hand at a horror novel (not for this contest) and it's a tricky business trying to get the tension level up without giving everything away. You are doing a good job. I made a few notes as I read on the beginning pages that I will pass along for you tomorrow. Best of luck to you in the contest. Gave you a vote.
Denna

You do take the cake on horrific descriptions! I definitely know what my nightmare is going to be tonight! Again, I find you have a knack for natural flow, good job on the dialect. Intriguing and descriptive on the shadow and how it collected the souls. The bully scene was right on. I cringe to find out what more comes, yet I am wondering how the baby fits into all of this along with that sneaky tree! Good job, and good luck! Robyn

I'm glad that you enjoyed the first two chapters - I am working hard to finish it before the deadline, but I have almost 300 pages posted here that you can read and find out what happens.... http://www.hestillwatches.com/onlineflip/index.html
Please let me know what you think - I assure you, there is some horrible stuff to follow! Enjoy!

Dale Moses

this book has alot of descriptive language that really shocks me for a person thats almost 13. your book is good hope it gets published

Read this before on your site. Glad to see you've joined it on the contest. :)