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please update i really like the book:)

Review - First, I must say, good story. Had some nice plot twists at end. I want to say also, you have the ability to write, and with all the books you have done, the desire to write. I can see you are a natural story teller. Now, with this desire and drive, don't you want to be the best writer you can?
Spell check is not our friend. LOL It does evil things like for instance: wait instead of waist - otter instead of utter - check instead of cheek - and shell instead of she'll.
I read for content, but it is hard when my mind and eye are drawn to words that are out of context. Wonderful work,but needs an edit. You are up against some very tough competition. So polish your work until it shines. Otherwise, very good job. Robynn

update please