BookRix

When oh when are we going to get more of this from you? PLEASE

More, please! I'm begging here XD

Nice story more pls

what the hell ...how can you just stop like that ....ohhh my please continue.

I enjoyed your short story. I'm looking forward to reading more>

The book is really good,if the conversations we more like a dialogue it would have been more exciting...Wish to see how it all ends... :)

I like it so far. It feels like it is real, but I have the feeling that the man will turn out to be the one she met at the restaurant and that when it is over, they will have a great laugh together about how much fun it was. Seems too coincidental to happen on thesame night she met him, but you never know where imagination might take you.

you cant stop in the middle of it all! lol continue!

Thanks for reading it and thanks for the feed back!! I'm working on the ending...it will have a few surprises in it.

The writing was good but since you tell us they speak it's better if you put what they said as dialogue. I want to see the end though :).