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Hi Jacco, Really nice poem. I hope you write more soon. Latrice

i like the fact boys still have the nerve to write about feelings. it's just not us girls who really think about the world with poetry. but the thing that really got me from ur poetry was that i know how you feel even in that space of words i understand ur feelings. it's the same kind of feeling i have.
i have to be honest it is way better than my work it's AMAZING well done! :)

Uhmmmmm. I just cried. This is..... Uhm.... Uhhh....hm

Simple and sweet. I really love your cover too!

I like the calm, deep sense of personal observation and awareness. Nicely done.

Welcome back!
This for me was a lovely sad poem. It touched so heavily on some of the feelings that we all share from time to time. Its in the bubble of our despair that inspiration can grow. Remember not to lose the inspiration that inspires outside that bubble.

Jacco we could never forget you. Loved the poem. I find myself relishing my alone time as well, but remember you are never truly alone as long as you have friends.

Good poem my friend.

Very beautiful, and solemn at the same time...It is amazing how one can put forth emotions into a form of art.