BookRix

I think the book is good because that´s the way the warrior cats really think about the "twolegs", but you should have written more things between the things that fireheart and sandstorm say. I don´t know if there are spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes, because I don´t speak English, but the dialogue is nice :)

The book needs much more detail

I am going to write a review of the book, The Kittypet Life, by Clearheart.

This is quite a good story, but there are some errors.

I'm sad to say there are many spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, and when a new person is talking you're supposed to start a new line.

Why don't you try to describe the scene around Fireheart and Sandstorm? Where were they? In their den, by the fresh kill pile, were they trapped by twolegs so they were talking about when Fireheart was a kittypet to pass the time? Right now it seems as if they're in their own bubble.

I'd love it if you could tell us a bit more about the characters. Did Fireheart want to tell Sandstorm about his kittypet life? How did Sandstorm react physically when she heard how Fireheart's brothers and sisters were stolen by twolegs?

I hope you will correct these mistakes, because I would love for everyone to have easy reading, with no grammar or spelling errors, you can picture the scene around Fireheart and Sandstorm, and where you can know the characters by the back of your hand.

Thanks,
QuailyCat

I believe the warrior series was one of my favorite series!

I LUV WARRIORS! I MADE A FAN-FICTION OF WARRIORS!!!

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