I would deffinitely enter this into the Dairy Contest, as soon as it's finsihed. Very few mistakes besides spelling and commas, remember after someone says something put a comma and then the quotation mark. Plus after words like however you put a comma, this rule also works for names. Example: "Katie, be careful of the ledge," laughed her friend Kelly.
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This is a great idea for our Dear Diary Contest. You can write a whole novel out of this. But I agree with kayteetoo’s comment. You have to be careful with your spelling, tenses and punctuations. You still have enough time to review and finish it. You made a good start. Keep it up!
Just update us with your e-book. Enjoy your week!
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I like this! Keep going. There are a few spelling mistakes but they are easily rectified. Also be careful of tenses.
I can see why you want to enter it into the latest comp and it kind of works as a diary. I'm not sure that it wouldn't be better as a book but with dates as chapter headings... if you see what I mean.
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