BookRix

I like the way it flows and the words sound so beautiful. I don't understand why anyone would want to modernize that way of speaking, but hey here we are! lol

Your book is quite mysterious, but it is very interesting to read. I like the part of Shrouding Riots and Casting Votes. I agree with Marion that you should also try lyric verse. Just continue to write because you have lots of potential to excel in your own craft.

Luxurious words from a hat cast out to lie admired.
Laz

Well its nice of you to admire my work however i do not like being compared with noe elses work other than my own however thnks for the comment

Nicasuhio E'spenvoll

Pretty creepy reading but the tone and rhythm of it reminds me of the writings of Nostradamus...the Prophecies. You seem to write in a similar style. Very interesting...learning the art of singing the prophecies out loud. You should try lyric verse. You have the potential for a happy little lilt in your writing voice....maybe a song or two?