BookRix

Very intresting, enjoyed the plot and everything that was going on! I can't wait for more!! It had me hooked and everything going on flowed nicely. If I could give you any advice, I'd say slow it down a tiny little but still its very good! :)

I liked it. It was very easy to read. Like that you spaced things out.
Good story, would have liked a moment or two more of interaction with mother or her world before the 'situation' (dont' want to be a spoiler)
anyway - it was good - please write more.