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I wish I had had the opportunity to make my own "book" like this when I was twelve years old. You made a great start and I am very privileged to be noted at the end of your work. For advice, I would tell you this: Read everything you have written out loud. When you do that, you can see where the sentences should end. Some of your sentences just run on and on - put full stops (or periods, as we say in America) after a complete sentence. Keep writing, Charlie, and let me know more about your life. All the very best, Valerie

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