Sidera Gemini

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User: Charlee
Sidera Gemini
Clarissa Valentine has always been a normal girl, that goes to a normal school, with a normal life. She never stood out, except from her flaming red hair, there was nothing different about her. Until something big happened. On what seemed like a regular day, Clarissa started to see figures everywhere, ignoring them at first, she finally decided to follow one, only to find out something that would change her life forever...


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Caterina A. Robinson

Oh wow. This is kinda like my story: Impossible. Except it has nothing to do with stars. Or Greek stuff. But, it is going to have spirits in it. And I'm like wow. This makes me look like I'm copying her. But I promise I'm not! I just heard of your book not 4 min. Ago. So I'm sorry if you think I'm copying you, but I'm not :I

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Caterina A. Robinson

Ok ok ok. I finished the last 3 pages. Now it's not like it. Sorry :3

Charlee

Oh no it's absolutely fine! I don't like own the idea of books with mythical things and spirits lol!! Thanks for reading tho! I hope you enjoyed it! :) I'll be sure to check out your book(s) soon! I don't think your copying me it's fine!

Caterina A. Robinson

Aw thanks :3 I was really worried about it

Charlee

Aww no it's fine! There's no need to be worried :)

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robbedbygreed

Just a comment on the technical side, it shouldn't be "air to the throne." The correct way to spell it is "heir to the throne."

That aside, I'd like to say that the story itself is great. I think it would do well in the market ;) However, I think you need to work on developing your character(s) a little more. And I don't mean listing qualities about them, but SHOWING me who the person/character is through their actions and... mehr anzeigen

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Charlee

Ok thank you, I will work on these points! And wow really!? thanks for the advice :)

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This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goodxxx please post more xxxx
Also. Go Taurus!

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