Crown of Legend

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Crown of Legend
Carrow saves a man by the name of Roshaun and as thanks for her saving him, he has a gracious gift in return...?

Carrow and her three aunts are witch who live on earth, but on the day Carrow practices her magic at Hill she causes a magic clash with a hidden Gate as it opens from another world.

From the door comes Roshaun but in the magic clash an old school building crumbles on top of him and Carrow stumbles across him. Without thinking she tries to save him through he tells her to beat it and leave him there

Join Carrow and Roshaun as they trade ways of lives with major surprises and Carrow finds out the real reason she has been on Earth since just after her birth. And Roshaun has he tries to get Carrow to accept his 'gift'.



P.S. Just started this book tonight 1/15/11 so go easy on me ^^'

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kickfighter

Hey,

a very good story. Your intersting writing kept me reading. Your stil of writing is also very fluent. If you allow me a suggestion; just have look of the Text,i've only seen a few little mistakes. Pls keep on writng the story.

With love,
kickfighter

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chloeknox18

You're a really good writer. You're so descriptive, I could picture the first chapter perfectly!
Just make sure to look over your work for a few MINOR errors. All I saw were a few mistakes involving past and present tense within a sentence.

Keep me updated, Plz!!!
Chloe!

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animator0123

It's an interesting plot, and the characters already show you who they are a little bit. I can't wait to read more. You should probably re read it though because there are a few typos that need to be fixed.

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chloeknox18

Bluedragon is right. All there is, is the cover...no book!!! Ahhhhhh!!!
Now I'm just going to be wondering all day about what this book is about!!!
Urg!!!
Message me, when you update!!!Plz!!!
Chloe!!!

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bluedragon

where is the book? Went to read it and there was no page turner. So how can anyone read your book? Bluedragon

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bluedragon

where is the book? Went to read it and there was no page turner. So how can anyone read your book? Bluedragon

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