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so far so very good!! i cant wait till theres more keep me posted!! thanks ~erica
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Hey,
a very good story. Your intersting writing kept me reading. Your stil of writing is also very fluent. If you allow me a suggestion; just have look of the Text,i've only seen a few little mistakes. Pls keep on writng the story.
With love,
kickfighter
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I can't wait to see where you take this! Keep me updated =)
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You're a really good writer. You're so descriptive, I could picture the first chapter perfectly!
Just make sure to look over your work for a few MINOR errors. All I saw were a few mistakes involving past and present tense within a sentence.
Keep me updated, Plz!!!
Chloe!
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It's an interesting plot, and the characters already show you who they are a little bit. I can't wait to read more. You should probably re read it though because there are a few typos that need to be fixed.
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Bluedragon is right. All there is, is the cover...no book!!! Ahhhhhh!!!
Now I'm just going to be wondering all day about what this book is about!!!
Urg!!!
Message me, when you update!!!Plz!!!
Chloe!!!
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where is the book? Went to read it and there was no page turner. So how can anyone read your book? Bluedragon
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where is the book? Went to read it and there was no page turner. So how can anyone read your book? Bluedragon
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