The Lady of Light

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The Lady of Light
This is a prologue-type story of a series I am working on, and will be a short story/novella at best. It is a working progress, and I would appreciate any criticism and feedback you have.

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In a word of fantasy and magyck, the races overthrow a race wrongfully placed at the head of the world. When Dorian, a part of this very race, discovers the past sins of his people written in an ancient journal, he plans to restore the world as it should be by freeing an ancient goddess, Ilianna del Miora, The Lady of Light, believing this will end the war.

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Gelöschter User

This story would be among the good books on this site, if it was more known. That's the problem of newbie bookrix members. You put a book up and expect readers to find it. it doesn't work like that I'm afraid.

Readers will search for the books with the most views and hearts. If yours isn't among those, it will become lost in the jungle of stories there are on this site. So, advertise anywhere and everywhere, however you want... mehr anzeigen

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ChanceGray

I have been off for a while, so only just got this, but thank you for your comments :) I finish my job in a week which is 70+ hrs a week (ugh) so I will definitely get back to writing this after, and will begin promoting it :) Thanks again!

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Gelöschter User

I really enjoyed reading your book. It had a few mistakes here and there but those can be fixed any time. You've got a lot of potential and I hope you write more soon. Please tell me when you update.

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Gelöschter User

Oh yeah I forgot to ask, do you still want a cover for this book? Because about two months ago you wrote something in the group that I'm in charge of saying you wanted a cover for this book.
If you still want a cover, I have a few ideas. If you want to, message me and I'll tell you what they are.

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E.K. Perkins

I'm surprised that I am the first to comment on this book.

It was truly amazing, in fact, I am even wondering if you are just a self published author or a famous one. Even though there were a few mistakes, like in some places you misspelled things or forgot a word or letter, but this book has potential. Please finish it and tell me when you update :)
Eva

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