The events happen to fast slow your book down so we can understand and process everything that happened also the baby changed gender in the last bits of the books
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Oh my gosh wow. It is short, but it still gave me goosebumps- and almost put me in tears. I was able to read through the mis-spells I hate that they don't have spell check. I mess up a lot too. This story though, You did AMAZING! Great job.
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thank you!! I wrote this along time ago when I was first starting out. I keep meaning to re-edit and write more, but never get around to it. I think it should be longer.
Plz plz plz update my daughter loved this book it would mean the world to her
There is a second book to this. Make a move. I am thinking of writing a third book in the kiddo's point of view. I'm a much different writer now though, so it may not make sense, but I might go for it.
Go for it go for it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
its a very interesting story to read but the misspelled words through me off a bit
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I wasnt sure if i was going to like it but its an amazing book this sshould be on shelves keep going with the books -a faan
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thanks your comment literary made my day, still working on it :D
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Good Book Daniel and Sophie <3 Keep Writing Thank you!
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Keep me updated and...please write more =)
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thanks! i was wondering if i should wright the rest of the story and since you like it i'll continue
<3 chaleN
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I could give you tips if you want I won a mystery contest for best story in my class