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i really x10 love this one....

I loved your story and I was smiling as I read it. We had to hide the sweets with my kids but one child could always find them, and catching him was a lot harder.
I liked very much howCharlie came up with a plan, and how Jake was a little skeptical but she won him over. This is so realistic between family members. I know the art of negotiation these children used against their cookie monster.

I really enjoyed your writing style and wanted to thank you for writing this funny story. I needed it.

What a cute little story. With a few whimsical illustrations, you've got a fun children's book on your hands! Great work!

It is like twins to get into mischief together. I know, because there are twins who are my cousins.

Thanks for a good read. :)

I enjoyed this. It was quite well written. My only gripe is....please do not put phrases such as: "He said" or "She replied grinning," as stand-alone sentences. They must follow dialogue with a comma and then, "she replied with a grin."

Apart from those minor distractions, good job.

Dad, are you mental?
Classic!
A little "larceny" in this fine story:) Excellent job.