Very short, yet very moving. It wasn't exactly your fault that the baby was miscarried, tons of kids get chicken pox. And as you've written in the cover, you'll get to see him one day :)
Good luck in the contest.
-Angely
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cassidy.shay,
This is a heart wrenching and well written true story. I hope you have moved forward in knowing that you are not responsible. Always hold your head up high and know that we cannot control everything that happens in life.
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you spelled dried on the last page wrong so before you send it in change it :) otherwise its awesome
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Very smooth, descriptive, and easy to follow. You convey emotion very well. Nice work!
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Very well done. There was clear emotion in this story,which makes it a very captivating read. Great work.
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A brave story written from the heart... you can't ask for any more from a writer. Well done. From all the comments you can see that this how best to reach people and hopefully also create some healing for yourself.
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Such a sad story and such a burden for you to carry when you were not at fault. Very well written.
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Review - You captured well how the child saw these events unfold. The guilt, the burden she carried with such a mature strength. Writing can and is a release. I hope this helped you with this burden. Well done on composition. Great job. Robynn
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