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Well written. A beautiful short story mirroring the idea of author touching sublime.
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I think if he was truly perfect he would have answered her calls, but maybe he didn't answer for a reason like he went to hospital or somthing?
I like this book, and i'm glad the girl decided to not worry about it too much!:)
Katie
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Ooh la la. Very nice. Although a bit sad. I say it is the man's lost anyway. Le tragic
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You are now one of my favorite authors on bookrix. This story makes me want to go to Paris!
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He does seem like the perfect man! The perfect partner is what we are all looking for. Thanks.
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Falling in love on vacation is always fleeting and fun. This book brings back some good memories. Thanks for writing it.
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I did go back and change my mistakes.
It seems no matter how much i look over my work there is always something i miss.
I really appreciate your help
thank you!
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A suggestion: you keep writing "the women" when you should write "the woman" -- this is a little confusing. You have time to fix this. Good luck.
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This is a very realistic story. It has a sad ending for the girl but she will always have Paris.
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