Wichtiger Beitrag
This is a work in progress, and I'm planning on it being pretty long, so this is not the whole story. I'm uploading each new chapter as I write them.
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So far so good. Would like more of a description of the city. And what sort of goods are people carrying about? A good set-up of the conflict without getting into too much detail. I like the premise of seeking out those who may hold magical power and why it is not a good thing.
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Interesting premise. Page 9-10 great clarity and writing. I suggest editing the beginning. Shorten sentence-work for greater clarity. I will read more- thanks for letting me know about your story. Janice
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Umm I can't seem to download it I'm Trying to download it on my ipad 3
And I'm trying to upload it to my google drive but it says it's not supported when I go to read it plzz someone help