BookRix

Please update

plz update

im only on chapter two and its great so far i love how its just ;ies and gosssip

please add more I luv it

Thank you for your opinion, this is one of my first and it doesnt have any real emotion, please check out Wolf Pack..you may like that one better

You're right. It's good. But do any of you know what helpful criticism is?

Its okay. But you have no plot structure. The climax is in the exposition and it's just a little bit confusing. And also in the exposition (climax?) you sounded really flat. I couldn't really hear your VOICE and that's one of the main things that make up good stories.

awe thanks!!!

u should really finish the book because it sounds really good and i cant wait to see what comes next

its really god so far. PLEASE FINISH!