BookRix

I'm happy that you like it! =D

love this book write more!!! <3

yay! can't wait for more!

more

haha I'm sorry XD Im glad that you liked the book, and I'll look over the book. XD thanks!!

oh my god! y would u leav it ther! i mean tht aint fair!!! :O thts just abuse. i liked the book, but i think u need 2 look over it cuz ther was quiet a few mistakes. other thn tht i have no complants, apart from... YOU STOPED IT A FRICKIN ANOYIN PART!!!

I do re-read my book, more then you think XD But what do you mean Grammar, like Use different words? I'm not sure if I'm going to keep the last part with the other girl... do you think I should keep it? or get rid of it?

Although this is a good story, it'd be a great one if the grammar was improved. I know it's a pain to do, but it makes the book more enjoyable and easier to read. Otherwise it's a great tale, and certainly something different. I encourage you to write more. Remember that there is no shame in going back and re-reading your own work often!

I Love you<3

Thank you! Always glad to here that more pple like my book, XD I will!