BookRix

Hi,
I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

Loved it!!!

I loved the first page. It's very descriptive and carries the reader into the story well.

I'll keep a lookout for future chapters. I'm curious to see where you will take it from here : )

Though you have written a story with a smooth flow of narration, you have missed your punctuations and spellings. Please run the spell checker in the word to correct these errors. Your story is vibrant with teen energy.

You have wrote a very good story. It was interesting and we liked it alot, but you have some spelling errors. Otherwise we can't wait to read more.